Finished my review and added my comments to the page draft since it's probably clearer there. There was one link in the draft that I didn't see in the preview (18F User Experience Guide — Research ), and I commented on 3 other links - one that I think we decided should be removed, one that was duplicative, and one where I wondered if there was a more up-to-date resource to link to.

I read over and clicked all the links focusing on the a11y section. The only slight oddity is that when I click the plain language link I see a bunch of weird code (maybe tracking code?) in the URL

1.Try clicking the "learn about writing in plain language" link under "further reading" in the "embrace accessibility" section.

2. Then look at your browser bar to see the URL or see below:

https://www.plainlanguage.gov/?_gl=1*t39m7h*_ga*MTI1NTE2MTY5Ni4xNzM0NTQ2MDY0*_ga_HBYXWFP794*MTczNzY0NDA4Mi41LjEuMTczNzY0NjA4MS4wLjAuMA..

It didn't seem to do that on the other plain language link on the page. I also deleted that code and the URL works fine. So maybe just a weird glitch (?)

I just reviewed it and all looks good except 2 links at the end of the page, which are broken:

• Delivering Excellent, Equitable, and Secure Federal Services and Customer Experience [performance.gov]
• OMB Circular A-11 Section 280: Managing Customer Experience and Improving Service Delivery(PDF) [performance.gov]